an absence felt in sleep
I love how this poem managed to make me feel like I'm wandering through the night and everything sort of gets undone and floats around
That’s exactly what I was trying to capture :) <3
Loved the pacing and phrasing of this piece. Made it magical and surreal ❤️
Thank you <3 I’ve been working on my pacing recently so this means a lot!
My pleasure, I find it one of the trickiest parts myself. Especially trying to keep it exciting..
I felt the cold dew on my neck reading that line.
I love how this poem managed to make me feel like I'm wandering through the night and everything sort of gets undone and floats around
That’s exactly what I was trying to capture :) <3
Loved the pacing and phrasing of this piece. Made it magical and surreal ❤️
Thank you <3 I’ve been working on my pacing recently so this means a lot!
My pleasure, I find it one of the trickiest parts myself. Especially trying to keep it exciting..
I felt the cold dew on my neck reading that line.